Kuroba_Loki joined on Jun 30th, 2010, since that has made 641 posts that are still accessible today, 15 of which are threads. Helping shape the community, Kuroba_Loki has given 659 upvotes, and was last online on Apr 19th, 2014.
"Blumenkranz" ~ Kill la Kill OST
although this is a cover made by an actual german :D
Not very few,
No one has been able to leave "newfag" status ever since the new CL started :D
Though I believe I named some regulars midfags X3
I want to keep my newfag badge~ :D
Do you see this as a silly thread?? :<
"Beautiful things don't ask for attention"
-Sean O'Connel, The Secret Life of Walter Mitty
Congratulations to the authors that actually finished~ I know how hard it is to mix your daily lives with wew and stuff. So congrats!! I'm writing this cause DC said to congratulate the autho/shotshotshotshotshot
After seeing various authors' confidence in their stories, I'm actually quite excited to read this.
-Personally, I liked it, had a great atmosphere to it. I also see it going on and continuing even after the ending :D
-The protagonists also had a great feeling to them, and had good chemistry.
-She managed to built a very realistic future environment and was able to describe how it came to said future.
don't hate me for this @ecstasy :3
There are actually only two things which I found lacking in this story; namely:
-Description of the Posterium that was supposed to be the title.
I found the story had Posterium as a side story, I mean it didn't have much impact on the story aside from making the world as the way as the author wrote it. I just feel that you could explain more of what this Posterium is, I know that you were aiming for a "mystery" effect with it, and I get it, I just feel that as the story title, it deserves more attention. :D
-Lack of characters.
Now I know that you're all limited by the word count, but I couldn't help notice that you only focused on the UG and the protags on your story. It felt like your other characters were a bit lacking in their description.
EG: What happened to Liza, after she vanished? and the like.
And that's about it, that's all I have to say about your work @ecstasy, hope to see you writing again :D Now onto....
@kirn's "Following Procedure"
I liked this story as well, as short as it may have been, I think it is still a good read :D
-Good characters and settings
-Good character interactions
-Very nice descriptions.
I think this story had what xtc's lacked, but not everything is without flaw.
So here's what I thought was lacking or unneeded in this work:
-Too much description of devices and the like lessened the story progress description. For example, you could have elaborated more about the commands new order, but then again it's not the main point of the story so I understand.
-Too short. I know we have a word limit, but I still think you could have gone a little more longer than what you have written, and if you did, it would be a better story that it already is.
That's all! Thanks for the good read~
Next up on the list is @rinneko's "Transposition"
Firstly, the PROS:
-vivid descriptions with the use of colors and words which i really liked~
now the CONS:
-Lack of characters. Now, I know it's not needed, but I still feel that less than 3 characters interacting is lacking, I know i'm sorry :D
I'm sorry I've not much to say about your work, but I really enjoyed it :3 -bows-
I actually wanted to see how Cael interacts with his newfound world :D
Up next in the list is @--jack--'s "More Machine"
Speaking of a next writing contest, I might be planning to join~
to @kirn's disapproval
This thread is all about your superstitious beliefs, be it real or not, proven or not proven.
Stuff that you believe in, even if you know they're just superstition.
Here's an example:
"When you see 10 airplanes and picture them in your mind before you go to sleep, you can make a wish that will come true."
Try to keep it sfw please :D
BTW, you can post links and such.
I don't know why but I can't see creepypasta as superstitious belief..I wonder why .___.
Why be a fan of dancing?
I'm forever a slytherin
kuroba_loki is Radical Crystal Squadron Leader
mahou shoujo?? :3